Comments on Are you Going to Scarborough Fair?: Water Song

like an epilogou to some thoght left unfinished......

2007-12-15T18:55:00.000+05:30

like an epilogou to some thoght left unfinished...repatriated on a nite of lonesome birds...but yes! the birds did crow when i left my 'confessions to the wind'!
poetry is often a portrait of a body without a shape. 'stream of consiousness' was affective..
felicitations!

yes Diviani, the stream-of-consciousness technique...

2006-12-25T22:17:00.000+05:30

yes Diviani, the stream-of-consciousness technique used in this poem doesn't fall gently on the reader's mind...requires audience agility to keep up with the changing images...therefore I guess it works better with my guitar-harmonica-reading-audience- eyes-closed method!

it looks like this? it sounded better. if it was r...

2006-12-25T21:11:00.000+05:30

it looks like this? it sounded better. if it was really this.

i'm blogrolling you. (hah. like it makes any difference.)

rebel saint... hmm... i like it. as cliched as it ...

2006-12-25T17:57:00.000+05:30

rebel saint... hmm... i like it. as cliched as it seems.
i'm going to use it somewhere.
where are you? werent we supposed to meet?

too much in love wid the Girl of the rivers ,huh.....

2006-12-24T17:40:00.000+05:30

too much in love wid the Girl of the rivers ,huh..Inam?(smiles)

very well woven....goes perfectly in tune with a song -"River of Dreams"

[In the middle of the night, I go walkin in my sleep
From the mountains of faith, to a river so deep.
I must be looking for something, something sacred I lost
But the river is wide, and it's too hard to cross
And even