Comments on Are you Going to Scarborough Fair?: The Winter Jazz

a purple shadowed giant clock, and medusa-like tre...

2008-01-12T11:14:00.000+05:30

a purple shadowed giant clock, and medusa-like tresses of the mother that edge out of the frame...unexplained foetuses cast out from the bodies they belong to...I wish I had more colours and skill when I tried doing this piece justice.

this one was worth waiting for and as always I am ...

2007-12-21T19:04:00.000+05:30

this one was worth waiting for and as always I am speechless....
like listening to forbidden stories and enjoying them

i'm glad!.. go ahead.. i'll wait for the next one!...

2007-12-21T12:43:00.000+05:30

i'm glad!.. go ahead.. i'll wait for the next one!.. :)

i loved the dialogue between the dwarf and his mot...

2007-12-21T09:11:00.000+05:30

i loved the dialogue between the dwarf and his mother...the imagery is beautiful!...
but the last line is just up there!
beautiful...

@ Adreeka: I'll borrow this from Satyajit Ray, who...

2007-12-19T03:19:00.000+05:30

@ Adreeka: I'll borrow this from Satyajit Ray, who said it to someone who asked him once why his films had so much death in them - "Because there is so much death in life" .

But yes you have made me start to think!!! I think I will do it, write a poem without death. Would be a good experiment. Let's see if I can write one soon :)

Nice...the last line...the very last.

2007-12-18T23:59:00.000+05:30

Nice...

the last line...
the very last.

i couldnt resist !i had to come back to check this...

2007-12-18T01:04:00.000+05:30

i couldnt resist !i had to come back to check this out!..

u make winter magical.. i really wonder in disbelief everytime i read ur writing how the hell u get these images.. its incredible..

specially the mixing up of folk, legend with grim morbid darkness, n then a dash of the present..
like the unicorn,dwarf,death n then the videogames!.. fuck, its incredible!..the fluidity

This reminds me of the Grimm brothers. =P

2007-12-17T13:40:00.000+05:30

This reminds me of the Grimm brothers.
=P

Okay Inam; I promised you. Quoted you profusely in...

2007-12-17T12:09:00.000+05:30

Okay Inam; I promised you. Quoted you profusely in my latest post. Go here: Self-portrait in Blood

a sense of disbelief at the random images creates...

2007-12-16T23:06:00.000+05:30

a sense of disbelief at the random images creates a different sort of an effect

i will quote hungarian aesthete georg lukacs " looking beyond the palpable"

I mean from where do you get these amazing lines o...

2007-12-15T16:06:00.000+05:30

I mean from where do you get these amazing lines of yours?

Simply AWESOME!!

Absolutely brilliant.The sheer fluidity of your sh...

2007-12-15T14:15:00.000+05:30

Absolutely brilliant.
The sheer fluidity of your shifting metaphors makes the poem one of its kind...

[And thanks for the visit. Am linking you up from my blog...]

Dreamlike...very nice. Unicorns have a thing for t...

2007-12-15T09:49:00.000+05:30

Dreamlike...very nice.

Unicorns have a thing for the uninitiated tho!

"I am a ghost, dining on unicorns"...... gotta be ...

2007-12-15T08:41:00.000+05:30

"I am a ghost, dining on unicorns"...... gotta be one of your best lines......

Good! Extremely! Has uncanny resonances (not simil...

2007-12-15T02:50:00.000+05:30

Good! Extremely!
Has uncanny resonances (not similarities!) with a poem written by me which was entirely different though...I can't figure where and how...did you read this (the second poem) Inam? Will like your comments...
Will quote this one in a next post...

Exceptionally Good ....

2007-12-15T02:21:00.000+05:30

Exceptionally Good ....

and the game began......pockta, pocketa ,poceta......

2007-12-15T02:18:00.000+05:30

and the game began

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pockta, pocketa ,poceta....

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