tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post4975317741239473744..comments2007-08-10T23:34:08.671+05:30Inamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05179681869787870521noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-12462289890476944962007-08-10T23:34:00.000+05:302007-08-10T23:34:00.000+05:30

"The river's mouth is a cold flute". Brilliant.

Erythrocytehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12850856107580360138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-63160021998163735402007-07-04T00:17:00.000+05:302007-07-04T00:17:00.000+05:30

seems to me you have a thing for:<BR/>animals that glide<BR/>Leonard Cohen<BR/>Jazz<BR/>random-ness<BR/>touch and smell<BR/>haze.<BR/><BR/>there are alot of random visions and vibes that this poem gives out.<BR/>beautiful.

xiamazehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11807313047615309108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-51725685984727828702007-06-13T17:05:00.000+05:302007-06-13T17:05:00.000+05:30

jazz poetry at its best!!<BR/>guy,u rock.<BR/>ur poem reminds me of this quote<BR/>"today nothing is black,nothing is white...it's all in shades of grey"<BR/>and the symbolisms are powerful!

little boxeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07011839933124378047noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-83215564353005447202007-06-12T09:54:00.000+05:302007-06-12T09:54:00.000+05:30

ahh ive read your stuff in the statesman 8th day.<BR/>amazing stuff.<BR/>:)

weevil girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15519897714465144353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-54919413985688548112007-05-27T18:43:00.000+05:302007-05-27T18:43:00.000+05:30

"Sisyphus prowls upon your prayer...but in this bare morning, you only remember gothic sparrows. Come, step into the painting on the wall..."<BR/><BR/>This begins brilliantly, and the rest is like a dream- highlighting facets of a soul, of a life, of a different existence... <BR/>This is one of your best jazz poems!!!

anurimahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07872560869918957189noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-87708330873120518472007-05-24T21:24:00.000+05:302007-05-24T21:24:00.000+05:30

I find myself lost in the mazes of symbolisms ...A1,too good.

Lord Jimhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05780198919060262785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-18533822103611040382007-05-19T23:10:00.000+05:302007-05-19T23:10:00.000+05:30

biblical strains....prayers..deliver..<BR/>romantic visions..very new juxtapositions...so much to choose from!!!!! (morning moves like a river/bride of winds/birds of screams/cold flute/)<BR/><BR/>trickling shades of grey n white...nice read.

SHEELONEEhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11804521596654206698noreply@blogger.com