Comments on Are you Going to Scarborough Fair?: Shreds

I wish the two of us could just sit together with ...

2007-11-04T22:36:00.000+05:30

I wish the two of us could just sit together with your poems laid out in front of us......and you would tell me what each line, each word means....why you wrote what you did....what was going through that incredible mind of yours.......I wish...I really do..

"I stole the truth from unwilling prophetsand here...

2007-09-13T20:21:00.000+05:30

"I stole the truth from unwilling prophets
and here I am
painting streets with vanishing points;"

First time one comes across anything resembling rhyme in your gothic poems. Another dark masterpiece.

as i told u..the best thing abt this poem is its T...

2007-09-08T09:56:00.000+05:30

as i told u..the best thing abt this poem is its Title.That in,itself, completes a lot and invokes further ripples within the words....there's again a recurrent violent wave running althrough...Nice. :)

I think this is one of your best. The sheer power ...

2007-09-06T20:41:00.000+05:30

I think this is one of your best. The sheer power of the images amazes me.

I can picture a painting that moves through frames... I love the poem in its entirety, for the first time I won't be able to choose lines that I like 'best'... doing that would be disrespectful to a poem like this...

I know you...I am sure you know me too... :)glad t...

2007-09-04T23:09:00.000+05:30

I know you...I am sure you know me too... :)
glad to read your poems...glad to know you are a S&G connoisseur

I can feel the melody of your train slipping throu...

2007-09-03T03:07:00.000+05:30

I can feel the melody of your train slipping through my fingers, the harsh whistle driving me mad...