tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post1359821404512510422..comments2009-10-20T22:05:32.775+05:30Inamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05179681869787870521noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-3239001059488178572009-10-20T18:30:50.995+05:302009-10-20T18:30:50.995+05:30

Parts of this poem are just sheer genius.<br /><br />&#39;miracles in the rain,<br />I discover you at dawn,<br />on a bridge across the blue layers of time and song&#39;<br /><br />This stanza is lovely. Haunting imagery. Lovely alliteration.

Elendilhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04358056466348715555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-35164939689603592082009-06-28T23:10:19.875+05:302009-06-28T23:10:19.875+05:30

through<br />the ruins of our strange affair<br /><br /><br />and I am stuck here, I keep repeating this unfinished line to myself and I can&#39;t forget it, nor move on.

Anurima.http://www.blogger.com/profile/07872560869918957189noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-7643887538197257802009-05-31T21:54:15.082+05:302009-05-31T21:54:15.082+05:30

Quite a long one by your standards.<br />Liked it for the way in which it spewed abstract images of redemptions and reunions.<br />Some parts appealed more than the others stanzas 1 and 7 for instance.

Sujoy Bhattacharjeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05780198919060262785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-54016944670540268322009-05-17T10:50:00.000+05:302009-05-17T10:50:00.000+05:30

u're gettin dere.

ishanihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08606815344060156211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-67546583174307754122009-05-17T07:03:00.000+05:302009-05-17T07:03:00.000+05:30

Loved it in parts, found it beautiful and disturbing in others. And then there were electromagnets which I simply didn't get!

arachnidhttp://arachnid.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-23225121040898092282009-05-14T11:10:00.000+05:302009-05-14T11:10:00.000+05:30

Should i call you Ishmael Inam!!???felt a strange kind of circling halo inside my bones..gosh!!<br />and what happend to the moon last august inam??

gangotrihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02110661604755364442noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-32229634667533853292009-05-13T10:11:00.000+05:302009-05-13T10:11:00.000+05:30

Eerie and sublime.A bit nostalgic in terms of flashbacks.Great voodoo imageries in here.I also loved the wide gamuts and series of flickering images.

Deepteshhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00369208312465209116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-42462022257132187832009-05-09T20:49:00.000+05:302009-05-09T20:49:00.000+05:30

"and listen to my confessions,<br />covered<br />in sand and rose."<br /><br />wow!<br /><br />actually dis mad mansion dwells in all of us...ur work makes me think.<br />Like always,ur work is striking, mesmerizing.

Xpressionshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01133641577029299130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-19180689073586423382009-05-08T20:28:00.000+05:302009-05-08T20:28:00.000+05:30

""who should I blame<br />for these scenes from a mad mansion?<br /><br />faith of the phoenix.""<br /><br />"enigma"...relief...wondrous...cathartic...poetry...poetry...poetry!<br /><br />ti's, your poem, ti's a gem!

Shahwar Kibriahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01366606022752780049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-12283472841320685582009-05-08T11:47:00.000+05:302009-05-08T11:47:00.000+05:30

through flowers and<br />electromagnets<br /><br />through<br />the ruins of our strange affair<br />loved the style, flow,emotions,<br />ya the all in all the best package

rajdeep bhattacharyahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16446606619400679336noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-34353222559719352212009-05-07T22:27:00.000+05:302009-05-07T22:27:00.000+05:30

beautiful...disturbingly so...and yet so very soothing...<br /><br />"and listen to my confessions,<br />covered<br />in sand and rose."<br /><br />love these lines.<br /><br /><br />summer did bring a wood pecker in blue...

Snowhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11002900806420897438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-43011708619096802012009-05-07T15:19:00.000+05:302009-05-07T15:19:00.000+05:30

Hey,Inam! This is hauntingly beautiful...Amazing..

Saima Afreenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13559120441585957512noreply@blogger.com