tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post1162213034585095787..comments2009-12-20T22:27:16.810+05:30Inamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05179681869787870521noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-52932726389358195982009-12-20T02:29:11.498+05:302009-12-20T02:29:11.498+05:30

One of your best. Truly so.

Anurima.http://www.blogger.com/profile/07872560869918957189noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-51530809105085271362009-10-20T18:35:51.560+05:302009-10-20T18:35:51.560+05:30

Awesome!

Elendilhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04358056466348715555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-72485833165081881902009-05-31T21:24:16.856+05:302009-05-31T21:24:16.856+05:30

Stark, minimalistic but yet capable of raising myriad visions. <br />Great stuff...

Sujoy Bhattacharjeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05780198919060262785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-55995589800547528842009-05-22T02:39:56.666+05:302009-05-22T02:39:56.666+05:30

Having just read through some of your work, this is my favourite. Potent, terse, and focused. A very good job.

mothreedhttp://mothreed.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-87578872550929774432009-04-30T11:54:00.000+05:302009-04-30T11:54:00.000+05:30

THIS POEM IS LIKE A FLIGHT OF STEPS LEADING TO AN OLD DOOR THAT WILL BE CLOSED FOREVER...THE LINES WILL GO UP AND DOWN, COME AND GO, UNGLIMPSED!

windlesshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05916654024157676407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-18588119936975199552009-04-13T21:01:00.000+05:302009-04-13T21:01:00.000+05:30

heyy, this is a fabulous poem!

dryadhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03582763487840338229noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-64219480842534356382009-04-06T12:38:00.000+05:302009-04-06T12:38:00.000+05:30

haunting. haunts me.

ishanihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08606815344060156211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-10107629038377484252009-04-05T22:38:00.000+05:302009-04-05T22:38:00.000+05:30

"noiseless birds flying in shock"<BR/><BR/>THE showstopper!!!<BR/><BR/>image-ing noise...the ULTIMATE synaesthetic indulgence...,<BR/><BR/>nailing it hard...as ever!<BR/><BR/>keep going!

Shahwar Kibriahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01366606022752780049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-36650972778068958622009-04-05T18:45:00.000+05:302009-04-05T18:45:00.000+05:30

this is beautiful inam. beautiful!

Anurima.http://www.blogger.com/profile/07872560869918957189noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-27579955401905014642009-04-05T17:26:00.000+05:302009-04-05T17:26:00.000+05:30

i think you are very nice irrespective of the stuff u write.....:P

silverwhitewinterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09853613823723056448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-37283374176008186762009-04-05T10:21:00.000+05:302009-04-05T10:21:00.000+05:30

You've heard "Voices under sleep"<BR/>"The heaving of earth at nightfall,restless"<BR/><BR/>:)

SHEELONEEhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11804521596654206698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-392078087084827762009-04-05T01:03:00.000+05:302009-04-05T01:03:00.000+05:30

one should know where to stop when begun..you know it,damn!!..you know it all!!

sayam banerjeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01228671710160034723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-22168501431637223572009-04-04T21:37:00.000+05:302009-04-04T21:37:00.000+05:30

Can I be your Ezra Pound? ... Then, for your entire poem, Only Keep:<BR/><BR/>"Noiseless birds<BR/><BR/>Flying<BR/><BR/>In shock "<BR/><BR/>Brilliant Lines. <BR/><BR/><BR/>And if you indeed consider the edit, it will sound like one other brilliant poem I'm extremely fond of:<BR/><BR/>Langston Hughes' poem "Suicide's Note"<BR/><BR/>The calm,<BR/>Cool face of the river<BR/>Asked me for a kiss.

fisherwomanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07517724860520604868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-75033074103867533022009-04-04T19:51:00.000+05:302009-04-04T19:51:00.000+05:30

wow! that one hit me real hard!

arachnidhttp://arachnid.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-70303735363927110262009-04-04T17:12:00.000+05:302009-04-04T17:12:00.000+05:30

Neat like a surreal speck of silence.This appeals to the senses.....and somewhere the words get lost in the 'purgatory' of your thin blue silence.amazing!!

Deepteshhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00369208312465209116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5786837738365859888.post-55361145370997378092009-04-04T12:55:00.000+05:302009-04-04T12:55:00.000+05:30

you know it all inam...dont you!!??

gangotrihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02110661604755364442noreply@blogger.com